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==//**The Gift of Giving Today we are doing an assignment for Marsha Global Dreamer site. We have been asked to respond to the assignment "The Gift of Giving!" I will be writing about the gift I would give, and to whom I would give it to. The gift that I am going to send to the people in Afrika are boxes of food for each person in Afrika. The reson that I am giveing all those boxes food is because I see it on t.v kids with no food or chlouthing and I feel upset when that happens to people that did nothing to deservy that. What's happening to them??? It would be very nice if Santa Can Bring my Gift the too people in Afrika and they can have a very happy Christmas like the rest of us Kids. They would perobly be eating all day but they would be happy and it would make me happy too. Wednesday December 12 2007 Well that ride made my car go out of gas! I hope next time I get extra gas for my car. Well today my class mates and I were asind to go on a game to trie it out. It's called The Monster truck game. The game is very fun but hard. well I think it was hard because what you have to do is make the truck go over a big poll and get pouts for it. talk about hard work. What I doun't like about the game is you have to push alot of buttons and the space bar. I wish that all you have to do is puch like three buttons and next it will go. But no the guy or girl had to make alot of buttons. The Secon thing i hate about it is there is only three levels on the game! You would thing that there would be 10 levels. Then there is the Threed thing I hate about is it you do all that hard work and you think there going to be the next level but it's game over. If I was the inventor I would make the game with more levels and less buttons. That would make me alot more happy. and that the game will be a little bite logger. Then all the rest of the games that the peson made it.**//==

//This is The respons from BrMa.//
Wednesday, January 09, 2008

Hey everyone listen up! I have great news I have to tell you! I now how much you people love listen to my friends and my personal response. So today we have another word for you guys can help us finger out today’s word. Are you guys ready for the word of the day? Here it is Attenuate is the word of the day. Now I am counting on one of you guys to help my friends and I finger out the word of the day! Hear we go!!

I think that Attenuate means that you can go shopping and get what you want. That would be a very happy moment for me. I wish that you can get what ever you want! And if your mom says those pants look too big on you, but you look great in them you cou;d still get them! But after you take of the pants your mom gets the ugly pants and says that would look so cute on you. But you just feel like saying those are the ugliest pants you ever seen! That is the reason way I think you can go shopping and get what you want.

Hey every one! I found out what attenuate means! Well go on tell us. OK OK one minute. Here it is. Transitive and intransitive verb to reduce the size, strength, or density of something, or become thinner, weaker, or less dense.

Wednesday, January 16, 2008

“Hey every one”! “I have great news to tell all you personal response readers”. “My friends and I have the chose to write any thing we want today. I am going to write about responsibility”! “That is my favorite word”. “Well some time I don’t do a very good job doing it. HAHA”!

“The first thing I love about responsibility is that you actually get to be responsible and your mom or dad gives you a little bit of slack”. “The second thing I love about responsibility is that you get money”. “My mom all way says that money isn’t every thing”. “But I told her that if you what a top money is importing”.

“I wish that responsibility wasn’t that hard because after you are all dun your work your mom only gives you 3 dollars and you did like 20 chores and you shod get 20 dollars for 20 chores”. “That really gets me made”.

That is all I have to say about responsibility. My friends and I will be back with more.

Wednesday, January 16, 2008 “Hey everyone”! “I have great news to tell all you personal response readers”. “My friends and I have the chose to write anything we want today. I am going to write about responsibility”! “That is my favorite word”. “Well some time I don’t do a very good job doing it. HAHA”! “The first thing I love about responsibility is that you actually get to be responsible and your mom or dad gives you a little bit of slack”. “The second thing I love about responsibility is that you get money”. “My mom all way says that money isn’t everything”. “But I told her that if you want to go shopping money is importent”. “I wish that responsibility wasn’t that hard because after you are all done your work your mom only gives you 3 dollars and you did like 20 chores and you shod get 20 dollars for 20 chores”. “That really gets me mad”. That is all I have to say about responsibility. My friends and I will be back with more.

Monday, January 21, 2008

Hey to all my fanes! I have some great news for all you wonderful people. Today my teacher is letting my class mates and I to write any thing we want to. So today I am going to talk about my favorite slush puppy drink. What is a slush puppy drink? You’re going to have to read my personal response?

What is a slush puppy drink you ask? It’s the most tasteful drink you ever taste in your life is good for every thing well not every thing. It’s good for the summer; it’s good when ever you get hot and its very moth watering. You can get it in 50 flavors my favorite flavor is Banana! Here is what the drink is made out of: water and ice. Then there’s a big thing the puts the water and the ice together and that makes slush and that is how they came up with slush puppy. I have no idea how they got puppy thou. But let me tell you some thing if you ever come to New Brunswick you can get a good slushy puppy.

There you have it that is what a slush puppy is very good and very cold just the way I like it. This was another personal response from BrMa. I hope you really liked my personal response.

Friday, January 25, 2008

“Hey every one today I am going to talk about my two dogs Misty and Trader” Said Brma. “I am so happy that I get to get to talk about my two favorite dogs in the whole wide world,”

“Misty is every old girl dog, I had Misty sents I was 6 years old said Brma,” Misty is a black and white dog but in the summer she looks brown and white” Misty loves to play with soft toys, eat Traders food when he is not looking,” “She loves to sleep past noon,” She loves tacking baths,” That’s all I half to say about Misty and know I am going to go on to Trader,

“Trader is a very young boy dog,” “Trader loves to play with toys and love to ripe them the cotton from the toy and make a big meas,” “For some weird reason Trader loves to bite boys, and girls,” said brma. “Trader runs like a little bull and he can jump like a frog,” Traders loves to site in his chare and look out the thick window to see if some one is coming up the high hill,” That is all I have to say about Trader,”

Bye BrMa.

Monday, January 28, 2008 “Hey everyone did you miss me?” said BrMa. “I know I missed you”. “Today I am going to talk about Uncle Jacque”. “The reason I am going to talk about my uncle Jacque because on one bad winter day he got stock on the island and the ice was breaking.” “My family and I were so scared.” Read the rest of my personal response and you will find out what happened.”

“All I could remember is that school wasn't going to be open because the white cold snow storm.” “My uncle told me that he was going clam digging and I asked him if I could go. But he said that it's to cold.” “But he promised me that he will be back before the snow storm comes, so I said ok.” “It was getting close to dinner time till my mom picked up the phone.” “It was my aunt Mary-Lou."

Thuresday, 07, 008

"Heyy every one stop what your doing and listen to me! I am going to talk about Toad Range", "Toad rangen you ask well let me tell you this book my class and I are reading is about a fat toad that want to make pecae with the humans so they would stop running over Cane Toad." So you now some of the book and now i am going to tell you what i think of the book and why"

"My favorite part on Toad Range is when he steles some guys under pants and he taries to ackt like hes a buterfluy but it not working really well for Limpy at all." "Limpy does some werid things in this book and i can't wayed to we finish it." I hope that Limpy and his crazy family is going to be ok after this book is ok."

"Well thats all I have to say about toud range I hope some day you read Toad Range and write about it to i will be back with some more info about Toad Range."

BrMa. Wednesday, February 20, 2008 To Marsha and her class, we hope you enjoy our attempt and describing what snow is like here is N.B. We are going to use the 5 senses when describing it. Hey Marsha I am going to tell you what snow fells likes, smell like, looks like, and more! I hope your wonderful class likes it! From BrMa Snow feels like touching a nice white kitten and all you can do is smail and every morning all you could do is look out your window full of crystals and smail and imagine if the snow would turn into little princess and all they do is dance with joy! Snow smells like ice (ice is some water and put in your freezer, to keep your drink cold.) Ice is one of the things that keep the snow to gethere when it rains. The Snow sounds like walking on a valley of chips and when you put your feet on it is like you fell like rolling in it all day long. But most days people go sliding on there slides ( slides are things that people site on so they can go faster down the white long hill) Snow looks like little angels dancing in the cold white beautiful snow, when It hits the ground it look like the world be came a different place.

Tuesday, February 26, 2008 There is alot going on in my mind rite now but I am only going to tell you the one thing I want to talk about! The thing that I want to talk about is friennds! What are friends and what do they have that your parents don’t have who come we need them and why do we need them! I want good friends not bad ones I don’t want a friend that say they will be at your house and then you get every thing ready they call and say they cant come because they have to go to another friends house because they have the new wii! I hate when they do that! That’s what a bad friend will do and if they were really your friend they would tell there other friend that there going to another friend’s house and maybe next time! But I want to tell you my favorite friend her name is Ka.Ga and she and me are the best friends of all  J ! Come back and talk to me! I will be back with more info about Friends next time! Tuesday, March 25, 2008 Hey it’s me BrMa the pirate and my favorite parrot Mr. Plethora! “Hey Mr. Plethora what are you doing today with your other beautiful friends?”, Well said Mr. Plethora said in a weird voice today my friends and I are going around the most beautiful forest to search up my name.”, Well that sounds like lots of fun can I come with you guys please I said.’’ Mr. Plethora said that I can come with his friends and him to find out what he’s name means.” “We packed up like a tropical storm and away we went to are beautiful journey.” “On are way there we picked up Plethora’s friends and away went to find what plethora’s name.” “We were walking for 3 beautiful hours and we finally found were we could find Plethora name.” “We liked like little bulls run over there first person in there life’s.” “We were looking all over the wall for plethora’s name but one of plethora’s friends found what his name means.” “But before we looked at the meaning we tried to guess what it mites mean. I guess that it mite mean that he wont shut up, plethora said it mite mean that he is strong but I think he is so dreaming because he can even get his own food, and plethora’s friends said the same thing. Well plethora’s name means name means a lot. Well I wish I could finish the story but I cant talk to you soon.

Pod Cast! http://sketchcast.com/view/1zty1L6/ Can you just image that you were sitting on a big blue chair thinking of what hooks mean. Well have no fear I am here to tell you about hooks. There you have it, hooks are great! Maybe not to you yet, but don’t worry they will as soon as I show you some examples about how using hooks and adjectives can make your writing a whole lot better! Here are some examples of how using adjectives can be really exciting and make the reader want to read on! Example: As I walked into the pitch black and spooky house trying to find the ghost of time I was scared out of my socks! Then all the sudden a strange sound of a window shattered. I was scared even more! See! Didn’t that make you want to read on? I know if I was the reader instead of the writer I would want to read on! Now I will give you some examples of what ideas for hooks. Example:  1. Topic  2. I wonder  3. Just my opinion but….  4. Listen up! Those are some good hooks you can use to catch a readers attention. So there you have it. Now you try using hooks. Give it a try. Bye for know.

Friday, April, 11, 2008 It was just me in the dark cold room with my crystal blue eyes looking at the bright white bored looking at the mysteries word that appeared on the bored. I was looking at the bored for some time and wonder what that word was. I found out that the word was Didactic. I gassed at the word some more and tried to decoder what it mite means. I gave it ago and my gust was that you got sucked into a ferriage and a big long ice sandwich tried to eat you like a hotdog. That would be a night mare! I think I guest it rouge again but hey I have to laugh some time! I think its time for my little mouth to stop talking and tell you what Didactic means so here I go. Didactic means: tending to give instruction or advice, even when it is not welcome or not needed There you have it you have it you have be a grate read and a grate imagination! If you like to read more of my grate responses just come on every Friday’s and you will have a new on every week. Wensday, April 16, 2008 Today I am going to write about some I know and there name is Dado she is my favorite person to talk to. The reason I am going to talk about Dado is because she knows what to tell me in the write way! Dado is one of my family members or one of my family member’s sisters. She is the best friend I ever had. Dado and I does every thing to gather on summer vacation. I will name some of the things that Dado and I do.  1.)  We go fishing on my uncles bout  2.)   We go clam digging  3.)  We go swimming at the beach  4.)   We go to the movies  5.)  We have sleep over’s  6.)   We have a barbeque  7.)  We go SHOPPING!! Are favorite thing  8.)   We go to the gym There is more me and DaDo do but I cant name them all because if i named them all you will be here are day! I would like to write for you more but I have to go talk to you soon. !!!!

Friday, April 17, 2008 Is it a bird is it a plane is that thing wearing my under pants. No that’s caption superfluous! “Why are you here Mr. Superfluous?” well I’m here today to talk about my name! Well the first thing every one should do is try to guest what my name means. Well my favorite guest is that you are my a flower. Sorry I can write more to be continued……