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The Gift of Giving!
==Today we are doing an assignment for Marcha Goren's Global Dreamer site. We have been asked to respond to the assignment."The Gift of Giving!" I will be writing about what gift I would give, and to whom I would give it to.== ==I was slowly un wrapping my gift when I saw the food inside!! I said to myself I should really give it to people who really need food. So I wrapped it back up with love and care and hope that Santa would come my way! I hoped from Santa that night so Santa could bring it to people in Africa!== ==I would really like to give it to people in Africa that don't have food. I would give it to people in Africa. I would give it to people in Africa because when I watch Oprah Winfrey's video about building a school for the girls. That is what really hit my attention!== ==I hope that this little personal response has taught you something! All your love ones please understand it is not about what you get, it's how you take it! I have learned something new today, and I hope you did too! I hope this really hit your heart because it hit mine really hard.==

===**January, 16, 2008 I am puttiing up posters for my band today! You should come and watch us play. Were of the hook. We just started are band so were working of songs and notes. We already have 9 songs and there awsome. Were called the black chicks. I play the drums. Alde is are lead singer. Mala is are getare player, and are most member is gela. She is are most inportent singer because she nows all are songs by heart. Do you want to hear one song. Ok here it is.**=== Concret moon Ohh- Yeah Why do you hurt me so much I need to no- your like a concret moon That is true yeah Choirs Concret moon just like you yeah ohhhhhhm Concrete moon just like you that is true Yeah oh yeah!

That's just the first part we have three pages of this song so. I fined it is really long thow. It is good so it paid off. Thank you for coming to my show see you next time.

Monday, january 21, 2008 anathema

I’m a scuba diver. I am 70 feet into the deep blue sea! I check my air. I don’t have much time to see everything I need to see but wait I see something floating on the top of the see. I swim up and I see a word. It spells anathema. Anathema says to me, “Hi I am a big word that now one knows what I mean so can you make me a meaning.” I say, “Yes indeed I will. So I was floating in the water until bang I knew the right meaning to this word.”

So I swam back to shore with anathema. I sat on the shore and took out my big red writing book and wrote. Know the meaning to anathema is now known as somebody or something that is greatly disliked or detested and is therefore shunned. That fits just right for you. my brother is a anatema. He is just such a pain. I would traid all my brothers for a good dog really. Anathema was the happiesty fish in the deep blue sea. Anathema did a cool summer salt in the air. He was filled with joy. He said, “Thank you very much.” He swam away with joy.

I took the rest of my wonderful summer scuba diving. Now this day I still look for him but I never ever saw him again.

Cale Cyr

It was a cold and stormy night. We were at are school when a strong stroke of ligthning stroke among the school. The electricity was out. It was so dark out that when the electricity came back on are teacher was not there. Are hole class screamed.

We walked out of the class room. Into the dark spooky hallway. When we heard a voice from up above. It said to us roudly and loudly,"You come today on the day of my weading to ask me for a faver. I am sorry I can't let this go on. You leave this school rigth know." So we did as any other kid would do. . . We ran. We ran as fast as we can when Dasi fell. Joge ran back to get Dasi. Dasi says," No leave me her I will be ok."

So we picked up dasi and ran. We ran all the way to the dark and spooky park. We ran all the way up to the upper park. and the ghost wouldn't dare to coemout side. So we never went to school again. we billed a new school and lived happilly ever after.

Cale Cyr,

It was that night of ever year. "Halloween night" Those trick-or-treaters. They bug me so much. I looked out my big shiney window... when I saw a little kid comming to wards my house when I ran out side in a flash. I screamed to the little girl, "you stay away from my house." The little girl ran in a frightening scream and never came back.

Two years later.. . I was cursed ever since I was a kid. Now I hate every holiday expecially halloween, and it was that night. Alout of antipathy children came my way. When I screamed, " Stay away from my house now." And now one never ever came back to my house and I am know 42 years old. But know no one comes by my house and I lived happily ever after.

Cale Cyr, I was hunting in the deep woods when I saw a ugly, frechishly larg toad jump upon my foot. Before he could do any other think I snaped. I picked up a big bolder and drift it at the toad. LOmpy said no. no please don't heart me.

Later on Limpy goes into a car and see's this big thing and it is called a telivision. Limpy remimbered the tree and the same road. He looked out the window and there goes his cousin Goliath. He was now a place mat. Well tehre you have it be for know.

Wednesday, February 20th, 2008 To Marsha and her class, we hope you ejoy our attempt at describing what snow is like here in N.B. We are going to use the 5 sences when descriding it.

One Amazing Day

Where I come from there is no snow. So my uncle describes to me what snow is. I wonder how it feels when you are really there. Welll this is where it all begins. So please keep on listening. One day I was sitting in my room in a humiliating way. When my Mom called and said, "Cale please come down in your furry, pink slippers so you can come and talk to uncle Felixe". I ran down stairs in a flash.

I picked up the phone and said, "hello". He said to me previosly a week ago if I wanted to go down to his house. He asked again nervously for me to say yes, I said to him, "yes i will go down to your house". I told my mom that I haft to go pack.

About three weeks later I arrived at uncle Felixes house. I could never tell you what snow is really like in words you would haft to see for your own eyes. I gasped and said uncle can we go out sliding. He said, "ya shure but do you have any ski pant (ski pant are somthing to keep your legs worm)". I said, "No I don't but I can use my splash pants".

Subsequently uncle and I ran out side to go sliding. Snow was falling on my face then melted. Snow was not yello, pink, brown, red, it's white. It's pure white and it is the best thing I have ever seen.

You would never ever think that snow smelled like somthing, but it does. It smells like freedom and aplomb. If I were to never come here I would of never found out this beauty of nature.

It also looks like cotine out of a worn teddy bear. Copious of snow fall each day. It also looks like when it melts smothies.

When you slowly lift it up it desolves into dripping water of you worm rofe hands. It is a desolving mter of fact. It feels sort of like a big ball of water.

You can also bild a colossal snow man if the snow is stickey. Teh snow only gets stick if it rains then snows. So that doesn't happen often where my uncle lives.

It also containes a large amot of snow. Snow containes firses in your body that is bad for you. You can play in it but if yuo eat it then you will get extremly sick. That is why us kids haft to learn not to eat snow.

P.S. ( If the snow is yellow then it is just not clean. If it is white it is still bad but yello is worse.)

Yellow snow is pee. That is why we can not eat snow because the dog marked his taratory.

Thank you for letting me come here uncle. No problem dear come any time. I will be wating. I climed on the plain and sat on my seat and hopefully I would come back next year.

Hi Mr. Cyr! We miss you so much. Hope to see you tomorrow teacher. Can you read my Personal Response too. Please.

Carlee C   Today there will be an open response. Two Amazing Cane Toads Have you ever been stuck between a guard and a grouching monster? Well, have no fear Goliath and Limpy are on there way. (2 years later). . . (3 years late). . . Finally have no fear peeing Goliath and his mighty clean side kick are ready to eat your socks right off. Wait stop personal response for a minute. Goliath needs to ask you something! I can’t shew something that is rubber. Is that ok with you???? “yes it is,” Said the class. Subsequently Goliath and Limpy ate that colossal, mean, terrifying thing I they had ever seen but it quite no never went down. So Limpy and Goliath end up walking the run away. Goliath jumps on Limpis back so they can get in the resting box. To Be Continued

Cale C

I was walking down the street. When I saw the biggest school ever. It was the school that was called plethore elementry. I saw it and my moth droped. I wondered how do people get a tore in that school. So i decided to take my own toor.

So the next night I walked to the huge school. I opened the door but guess what. Don't think that i am purfect the doors were louked. I didn't know what to do. When I looked over and saw a window that was opened. I jumped into the room.

Do you want to know about one thing that would make you a better writer? Listen close because I am gong to teach you something that is going to make your writing shoot up like a rocket. I am going to teach you about hooks.

So let me tell you why we use hooks. Writers like us use hooks because it captures a reader’s attention. It also tells the reader what’s to come. If you have a noun then add in adjectives to dress it up. For example,

I am walking toward my beat up black car when I saw …

Now doesn’t that make you want to read more. Well it makes me want to read more and it is my own hook.

Really all hooks are about to tell the reader what is to come. When you write a story you are never done writing. Some times you just have to stop.

Cale Cyr It was just one normal day. I was walking down the road when I saw this old lady get blowed away. I ran after her of course. She was to heavy. I did not know what to do, but i got her alright. She gave me a gift. She gave me 7 dollars, but I told her that I canm not take this from you. Please take it back. She said right back, "No please take it I am giving it to you." So she places it on the ground and I pretended to find the bills.

Furthermore I kept walking. I walked so far that I meet up with this little boy. His cat was stuck in the tree. This looked like a job fof Cale Cyr.

Story.

**I wanted to get home so I did as I was told. I followed the sun. I was walking for days and days. I finally came to a halt. There were the lanes. I was so built up with excitement that I forgot what lane to go threw. So I just went threw the right lane. I walked and walked. I got to a complete halt when I saw this bright light. I said to my self, “Please work I need this to work.” I walked back words and ran as fast as I could. I got sucked into the hold. In a couple of minutes there I was on the ground of that huge fight. I said to my self, “Next time I could probably prognosticate what to come, so I wont get in trouble and wind up some were else like Africa or something like that. P.S. (The word prognosticate means transitive verb to be an indication of the likely future course of something.)**
 * I was running at the 15 minute jog when I hit this other girl. I fell on the ground before anyone could call the hospital. My teacher slapped both of my sweaty cheeks. I never woke up ,so I was knocked out. **
 * About an hour later I woke up. I woke up and saw my self in a coffin. I opened the coffin and I jumped out. I looked back at the coffin and said, “Where am I?” Out of no where I heard a very loud scream. They said that, “Ariys has arrived!” I turned around and fell to the ground and screamed, “OH MAMA.” **
 * Subsequently I wanted to discover the truth about these ancient people ,so I can ace this test. So I gave my self my own tour around. I walked right to the permits. I saw this guy who sounded a lot like snoop dog. I told him, “I got transformed to another time I want to go home and see my mom.” He said to me, “Listen I will find a place were you can go back home but you have to come back and fist it me.” I said, “yes I will be back.” **
 * Immediately after we were done chit chatting he said, “My name is Zoes.” I looked at him and said, “I thought Zoes was mean.” He said right back, “No I am not mean it is just that I am one of those kings so I have to lead those other people on.” **
 * I understood right away because I do the same to all my brothers and sisters.Zoes and I wondered and wondered why and where I could be. Although I already know from my colossal brain that I was back in Ancient Egypt time castle. **
 * In addition we walked and walked. He took me to a place that is called sphinx. Zoes told me, “you are so fortuitous in all ways.” I wondered? He also said, “Welcome to the colossal Stones of are memory’s.” **
 * Subsequently I tried to get back on task I need to get back home. We only have just a little bit of time. He said, “now that you know me I have to leave and go back under ground. I replied, “were do I go from here?” He pointed to the colossal, albatross mountains. He said, “You have to go threw the right lane until the end and you will find your way back home.” After he was down talking a bright light came and lifted Zoes off the ground and brag him to the sun. Before he left he told me, “Follow the sun and you will find your way.” **


 * Cale Cyr

This is a little note for Mr.Cyr. Hi Mr.Cyr we all miss you already. I don't know what you were thinking this word is hard. Mr. Cyr this is for you.

Superfluous** I’m a scuba diver. I am 70 feet into the deep blue sea! I check my air. I don’t have much time to see everything I need to see but wait I see something floating on the top of the see. I swim up and I see a word. It spells Superfluous. Superfluous says to me, “Hi I am a big word that now one knows what I mean so can you make me a meaning.” I say, “Yes indeed I will. So I was floating in the water until bang I knew the right meaning to this word.” So I swam back to shore with Superfluous. I sat on the shore and took out my big blue writing book and wrote. Know the meaning to Superfluous now known as to have more and more. Like the word extra. That fits just right for you. The big Superfluous did a cool summer salt in the air. He was filled with joy. He said, “Thank you very much.” He swam away with joy. I took the rest of my wonderful summer scuba diving. Now this day I still look for him but I never ever saw him again. Thank you

Cale Cyr.

Tuesday, April 30, 2008

There I was pulling my blue and black chair out from underneath my messy desk. I took a big moan and then sat down. My cheeks had pure white isicles hanging from my pink cheeks. I looked forward to the classes white board. My teacher stood pointing is brooken glasses to Emily and I. I had no clue if he fugered out that Emily and I brook his glasses.
 * Emily was a 5th grader just like me but she was not exactly a 5th grader she was a mind eating freack.Mr. Cyr was not done his yelling. I looked back up in the front. Mr. Cyr was walking closer and closer. I was pretty sure he was going to eat Emily and I. Although Emily back down right away I was left alone. Before he could say another word the recess bell rang. We were all running to the blue door when Mr. Cyr screamed, "Carlee you are staying in for recess we need a talk." There I thought right away that he was going to eat my flesh.

I ran back to my seet and sat down. Mr Cyr looked at me and said, "It was you I know it was you." I looked at him and said, "I //s//wear it was not me." He gave me the look and graved out his yello teath and started to chew on my arm. I remped my arm out and said, "you eating monster."

I ran home and told my mom to start packing. After that day I did noy have to see that monster. Thank you for reading I will be back.

Friday, May 30, 2008 Personal Response Writing: Please wiki a response for the following vocabulary: sparse! Far, Far away there is this frog who had a very bad cough. The frogs name was sparse with just pride in his name. He was no ordinary frog he was 516 years old. He was getting really sick so I was sent to far, far away.

When I landed I realised that I have to save the day but not only the day a life. I ran the building and said, "I am here now back away." They all steped back in flash. I took a deep dreath and liked all the slim of off his sparse tummy. The frog came back to life and that was the end of the mission. **